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Other than the looping (which I read in your despcription that the clip was only 15 secs long) it definitely has potential as something more. You need to work on the hand popping through his waist as he's walking, and he looks creepy without actual eyes. However, the lip-syncing is perfect and the movement (other than walking) looks great. Keep working on it and I think you'll do great.
Author's Response:
Oiy! I totally missed that, thanks for the heads up about the hand thing!
I'll see what I can do on the other stuff as well.
Thanks!
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This is a beautifully drawn piece. This took amazing talent and patience to do. I love the story as well as the music selection that you chose to animate. Please keep doing what you do. I think you can go a long way with this kind of this. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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That's the best way to describe this. The music was awesome, and I loved how you almost layered the backgrounds. However, is there a reason you chose a whole roasting chicken/turkey with a mask and tattoo running as the main character. That's just weird!
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This a simple concept taken to its greatest potential! I loved the music and the "choreography" of the spuares. Keep at it. I think you have some awsome potential as a flash animator!!!!!!
Author's Response:
haha, it is kinda choreography. kinda like "the dance of the squares" too bad I didn't make the music. go see arnas's stuff for more cool stuff :D
I really hope I have potential. you should try animating, or atleast reviewing more flashes :)
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Why would you think any self respecting woman would like this?! Just because men like to watch girl-on-girl stuff does NOT mean that we feel the same!!!! Please don't tell me to watch something like this again...
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OMG that music was so cool! The animation was a little first grade, but the story and audio TOTALLY made up for it!!!!!!
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The animation was difficult to follow. Maybe if there were some color it would be easier...better luck next time
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I absolutely love this cartoon! Way better than either of the previous ones with Raven. Great animation. Keep up the good work!!!!!!
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